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Early artwork for a project my girlfriend and I are doing on Shakespeare next year.
Will come with a site and stuff, and this could be considered as very early advertising ^^

Not completely ok with the book yet though, so it's submitted to change :)

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:iconmrballoonatic:
The only thing that strikes me is that the 'book' is possibly a little dark and perhaps a little small ... have you tried it using one page in a higher arc ... so that it looks like it is in the middle of being turned ...


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whooops ... I meant to also say I really like it ... I love the way the letters are flying off to form the word shakespeare ... perhaps the other letters that aren't making up the title should be taken from the rest of the alphabet to make it seem more random, or that only the letters making up the word unfolded are sticking ... just a thought
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Good thinking mrballoonatic, I might try that :D

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